Development: Feedback on Posters

After finishing all of my development posters I went out and started asking people for feedback on my work. What they think I can improve? What works well? and what is the message they get from the poster?


Here is the feedback I received on my posters.

Roald Dahl Picture:

• The Visual I's logo is lost to the back ground.
• Does not appeals to your target market.

Roald Dahl Type:

• Too many types of font, gets confusing.
• The museum logo gets lost in the background. 

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory:

• The chocolate bar does not look like a chocolate bar, too box shaped.
• The chocolate bar is trying to appeal to both adults and children, and does not appeal to either.
• The Gates are too much.
• Chocolate bar too close to the edge of the poster.  

Fantastic Mr Fox:

• Don't like the font used for the tunnel.
• Bring Text closer together.
• Have the Foxes digging coming off of the X in fox. 

George's Marvellous Medicine:

• Text needs to Be wrapped around the pot and jar more.
• The smoke is a bit flat, give it a 3D feel.  

James and the Giant Peach:

• Peach is pixelated
• Something is missing, need more to put your teeth in to.  

Matilda:

• Don't know if I would read the recipe.
• Instruction are to close to the edge.

The BFG:

• Reduce the number of wrinkles.
• Take a photo of a book, an old fashioned hard back.
• Take out the hand, could be seen as rude.  

The Twits:

• Text bleed in to the pictures.